Hannah, Age 9
Once there was a little girl named Jackie who, when she grew up, she wanted to be a fashion model. So she only asked for dress up clothes and her favorite thing, unicorns. And anything pink,and other pretty pretend creatures.
Jackie did have some problems. She never stopped asking for her favorite things,and whenever she saw something she liked, she would take it. Even if she had to fight for it. She always blamed something she did on Connor. Also, Jackie is a biter! I bet you are wondering who Connor is, right? Well he is Jackie’s little brother and she also lives with her mom Donna, her dad Paul, her dog Goldy and her other dog Max.
After many years Jackie had the same problems but she moved out to college so she could not blame anything on Connor or the dogs anymore. She still likes everything she did as a kid and she dreams the fashion model dream even more than she ever did. After four years of college, she is finally living her dream right now. She is at the pancake castle and living out her dream. But then, she saw a pile of syrup and looked in it. She saw her reflection and she realized how greedy she was and how snarky and snappy and rude she was. So, right after, she left the pancake castle and she started to run as fast as she could in high heels, a long pencil dress, and a vast trophy! She was almost to her family’s house (she still thinks Connor is a little lame for still living with his parents) and soon she ran up to the door panting and rang the doorbell. “Ring ring”! Connor opened the door and said “What do you want?” as Jackie replied “Get everyone I have something to say.”
Connor called his mom and dad over and welcomed Jackie inside for Jackie to talk. Jackie started to talk “I owe all of you an apology for what I have done when I was a child……”. Then she gave everyone everything she had taken and gave her family her vast trophy she's wanted since she was a kid and wouldn't expect it back. Then everyone lived happily ever after!!!!!!!!